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Blury Vision _ one shot

He sat there and watched her, he looked at her , studied the way her body moved inhaling and exhaling, he moved his head so he could see under the oxygen mask. Her lips were dry and pink from the oxygen, they looked perfect. He followed he eye lids as they flickered. One part of him wondered how long he was there, the other part just wanted her to wake up so he cold see her eyes, he looked around for her stuff, the paramedics had emptied her belongings into a plastic bagie, her watch ,her wallet , stuff like that, her seen her glasses wrapped in tissues, nice thought by the medics. He took them out and began to exam them, occasionally wearing glasses himself he knew how to clean them with out scratching the lenses, he put his left hand under his shirt and with the glasses in his right hand he gently cleaned the lenses , placing each one between his thumb and finger, you know the way, and repeated it on the other lens , he looked through them , making sure his efforts made a difference. All the time not realising that he was being watched by Jenny, although she hadn’t got her frames on she could make out what he was doing, the noise of the rustlings of the plastic bag woke her up, she wasn’t a heavy sleeper, although she didn’t fell like she had slept more like been knocked out. She lay there , looking at him inspecting her glasses , cleaning them and looking at his work, she didn’t exactly know where she was or what happened , but the cent and sight of Brendon made her feel relaxed about what ever had happened.

 

As he readjusted himself in the uncomfortable visitor chair he folded the arms of the delicate glasses and placed them on the bedside locker, it held a jug of water and a couple of cups.  As he looked back at her he didn’t notice her eyes were fixed on his at first, he sat back against the chair and began watching her body move to the rhythm of her lungs, within seconds he realised that those eyes, the eyes he had spent the past few hour looking at , well eye lids, wondering what they were like, he realised that the were no fixed on him, the roles were reversed , he was now the one being looked at not the lookers. He moved his eyes up the sheets and met with Darcys, he was speechless, he was amazed at her eyes, they were even more blue that her had imagined. He just smiled at her and let out a sigh of relief, glad to see her awake.

 

She move her right hand up from the bed and removed the mask, he lips were slightly stuck together , she opened her mother, proceeded to lick her lips and began to speak,

 

“He ..hey ,,, on my god me head hurts so bad, what’s going on?!” she questioned to her friend.

 

“I should be asking you! You totally fainted in the elevator, I had to be a REAL gentleman and carry you out and get help n all!” he said in a whiny voice, trying to put a tinge of humour into what he was about to tell her.

 

“ No Way,,” she began, trying to move up the bed” Jesus I’m totally embarrassed ,,, what’s more embarrassing is I’m in this bed in what’s obviously a hospital and I’ve a gown on ,,, please tell me were my clothes are?!”

 

“I totally took them” he proclaimed , sitting up in the chair,,,” I’ve sold them already on E-Bay … haha syck!!  Nah really I was made wait out side while they did tests and changed you, I did try my best to get a peek but …..” Jenny began to move awkwardly in the bed not knowing if he was kidding or not.

“Hey don’t worry I’m kidding,,” he continued , realising  she was uncomfortable, “ they put you stuff in bags, there in there , “ he gestured toward the locker.

 

“I’m going to have to let them know your awake, and I kind of took it upon my self to let Amy and the gang know what happened, I didn’t know weather you’d want to let your family know,” he watched her , waiting for a reaction, but she still was very weak and just nodded in agreement to what he was saying,

 

He stood up and began to look round for a nurse or someone to let know that she was awake, but he was stopped in his tracks by her voice “Brendon what’s wrong?!” her voice was shaky as her brain begin to break down what had happened, what ever his answer was going to be wasn’t a good one , she looked at him waiting for his eyes to meet hers , but they didn’t , he just sighed out the words “ I’ll get a doctor, I’ll be back,’ his voice trailed off ,,, his footsteps followed by Darcy’s weak calls “Brendon hang on”……………

 

 ( Another weak attempt … - Jenn )


Posted on 11/09/2008 8:04 AM Visits: 57
jonnyirishguy: 11/10/2008 1:21 AM
it is STRONG, and it is a SUCCESSFUL attempt
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